Teacher Feedback
The main feedback from our teacher was that the digipak was too dark and there was not a variety of images and one of the panels was too hard to read. For the website, the background image needed changing as it wasn't our own image it was a standard image that came from wix.com which did not match our genre. We were also missing a page. For the video quality of some shots wasn't great and didn't understand the narrative. There was continuity issues as shots of narrative, Katie and rapping didn't work well together.
Student Feedback
The main criticisms were about the images used in the digipak as they were too dark to be seen and that they needed better colours to be used. For the music video was the lip syncing did not match the music which ruined the performance, and we needed a better variety of shots in different locations. The narrative was also not very clear as well. The website needed more images and more text as it was bare.
To improve we would need to re-shoot for all products and redesign the digipak and website to better match the products and look more professional. we need to re-think on how to film the narrative in a way that people can easily tell what is happening.
